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Lightning Platoon 106 prologue
This is my first time writing SciFi so crushing reviews are wanted. Thank you in advance Lightning Platoon 1069.12.2048 Suur-Karjala, FinlandIt was yet another peaceful autumn day, the leaves were ...
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Lightning Platoon 106 ch. 1 part 1
I would love some advise here because I'm worried I might have made this chapter a bit of an info dump, so advise on that would be lovely. Thank you ...
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Lightning Platoon 106 ch. 1 pt2
The troopers soon all woke up, and started to gear up. Bang carried his usual gear out from a chest which carried the quite unimaginative title of “Bang’s box”. Lauri ...
